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All Deviations


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Days Go By
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Day after day I put one foot in front of the other
Hoping to get somewhere
Eventually

Memories along the way to keep me company
Memories that are no comfort at all
Yet they prevail where people have failed
They make me feel, the good and the bad

Everyone walks by on their own journey in life
And still I remain helpless
Can they not hear my plea for help?
See the scars I bear?

Am I that good at hiding the fact that I’m broken?

As time goes by my cries for help fall silent
I blend in with the crowd and draw a smile upon my face
Inside I chant my mantra
I’m okay, I’m fine…..

Day after day I put one foot in front of the other
Pretending to have a purpose        
Pretending to belong
Just pretending

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©2006-2008 ~Anux
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just some angst that popped into my head
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~Yeriel:iconYeriel: Dec 12, 2006, 10:04:46 AM
Wow, so good! I can relate to that, especially with school and all. I would always try to push myself to get up every morning (even though I don't want to XD)

As time goes by my cries for help fall silent
I blend in with the crowd and draw a smile upon my face
Inside I chant my mantra
I’m okay, I’m fine…..


Yeah, I can't help but put on a facade and pretend that everything's ok. I'd like to show my real emotion without people asking me 'What's wrong?' I feel the way I do because… I just do!!! XD

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"I'm standing on the edge
And coming to my senses
From a reverie..."

- Unnamed song, Yoshiki - Violet UK
~Anux:iconAnux: Dec 12, 2006, 4:14:51 PM
lol, i agree. hmmm.....its interesting that to everyone this poem can been many different things but it all comes down to the same thing i guess...i donno wat that is at the moment cuz i have too many thought in my head...but ya!!! ^.^"